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One SecondDear You,

Yes, I know what you're thinking:

"There's that creepy girl again,
the one that stares at me all day
and gets all nervous when I'm around."

But I have a lot to tell you,
even if you're not reading this,
so just bear with me.

You- yes, you- are ruining my life.

I used to be so content with myself,
convinced that love was pointless
and dating people is just a hassle.

I knew that looks didn't matter,
that I should look out for myself
and not care what other people think.

What have you done with that girl?

I'm wasting all my time on you,
and I know that, but I can't stop.

I worked so hard on that project,
hoping it would be per

Cherry Blossom TreeBlack curly hair
Black asphalt
Black pants, shirt & shoes

What's all this worth?

To see the sun beaming into
Your brown eyes
And bright smile

I get that for free!

'Cause between you and me,
We're meant to be
Only our eyes can see
......Us
Together for eternity.

You're more than a friend to me
You're my lover
Sitting under that tree

Where the cherry blossom petals
Blew into infinity..... :-)

Dark and DangerousDark and dangerous
Your smile it haunts me
Your voice it kills me
When we first met we became easily friends
My heart raced as we learned more of each other
But when you stopped noticing me
My love grew deeper
And my cheeks turned red when thought about you
So now i have one last chance to say this to you
I love you
But you can not love me back

Her passionate flameHer flames burn passionately
Like a sparkle from a
Royal jewel
So beautiful

dysmorphic weatherspring came late this year
snow arrived along with april
and i found myself wondering
if this was what the whole year would be like
it wouldn't surprise me
given the recent events
pathetic fallacy and all that

Single FlameShattered and broken apart
I watch you fall apart once again
You don't scream, but i see your pain

I stand by your side over and over again
Just to watch you hurt
She took your heart and tour it apart,
Just to see you cry

She wouldn't help you, she doesn't care
She doesn't even feel you there.
All alone just let her go

Let me guide you through the night and show you the light
For I love you so, but you didn't notice me that summer day.
Now I'm standing here all alone.

Why didn't you let her go,
Why didn't I let you go.
I loved you so, but your gone
For she killed you

I'm all alone, just wondering why you wouldn't let go
I just wait every

unfwould you push me away if i tried to kiss you

because you know i so badly want to

and if you would just open your heart to me

you’d find out my lips are warmer than tea

it’s too hard to try and rhyme this line

so let’s get close and simply intertwine

In The Woods.I am the earth. I am the dirt.
I am the forest that covers the landscape of my horizon.
I am the trees, branches and leaves that fills the space between spaces.
I am Gaia and he is the sun.

I am the woods.

He is the breeze that makes my leaves shake.
He is the autumn that makes my leaves break.
He is the wind that caresses my dusty skin.

I can smell the rust on my nostrils, penetrating my brain with it's metallic smell.
I can feel the moist that wets my flesh, making my skin all tingly.
And I can see him getting closer to me, between the trees, as the sunset falls.

In the woods.

I wait for him in the grou

Upon the Final NotesA dance is a dance, a twirl in the night
Begging for a reason, kindling to the flame.
Friendly words whisper to friendly ears,
Of times done and gone.
Lips smile, brushing a soft shoulder,
Begging the heart to make a mistake.
Only will remains, struggling,
Just to persevere.

UnrequitedShe falls in love with him twice a day
and hates him twice as much by night
The starlight makes ribbons of her hair
which is more than he will ever do
And the breeze whispers sweet nothings in her ear
which is more than he will ever say
Her hands are technicolour
and her knees are made of iron
but only in daylight
when he is the sun
And then he sets
and the grass is sprayed with frost
and she can no longer stay outside
without worrying about hypothermia
He’s a desert
and she’s caught in the sand
She falls in love with him twice a day
and hates him twice as much at night

Give Me Pain.Put a gun to my head,

I'll help you pull the trigger.

All ounce of self love

Vanished with your memory.

Stab me in the back,

I'll beg you to push harder.

Any last hope of happiness

Disappeared with your presence.

To be hurt by you

Would be a pure blessing.

Though, nothing less than

An excuse to see you one last time.

Rain Engagement Alternate EndingRain patters on the window pane
While we stare out clear windows
Hands pressing, heavy breathing
Each wondering our predestined fate
Through one sheet of precut glass
Like tears streaming down cheeks
Distance measured in lengthened miles
Beating chests, muffled sighing
Two windows merging as one
As our hands finally touch together
Wet hair, sweet freshness still falling
Our lips lightly graze, beautifully haunting
Arms wrapping, familiar and cozy
My head resting on your chest, yours my shoulder
A simple embrace to speak a thousand words
Emotions uncontrollable from first formal sight
Yet alas, you place your finger to my lips,
Whisper the ine

EndgameThis is the endgame,
I can do this.
I could do this.
Yell,
Tell you off,
And just end it.
I don't want you to be friends with me,
I don't want you to be anything,
But a shadow,
Disappearing from my mind,
Why won't you go away?

TnM~-No estas Sola,Marie...

Iba caminando,completamente perdida en mis Pensamientos...
Cada vez que daba un paso,las hojas secas del paisaje Otoñal crujían,
Y el suave silbido del viento, movía tiernamente las pocas hojas anaranjadas de los miles de arboles...
Y ahí estaba yo,
Recordando tristemente ese Día...
Ese Día,
Que Odiare hasta el Fin de mis Días...
Y,
Empezó como el Mejor de mi Vida,
Que
Termino siendo el Peor,
Toda un Pesadilla,que parecía que no iba a terminar...
Y no termina,jamas...
A partir de que Él se fue...
Toda la Pesadilla comenzó,
El Cielo se volvió gris,
Todo estaba Oscuro y sin vida,
Yo,
Jamas volví a ser la misma...
Ni lo volveré a ser,
Ya no soy esa Chica a la que todos Conocían y querían,
Ya no soy esa Chica ale

Our Afternoon of Dancing RainWalking home alone, as usual,
Phone brightening with your name
Drops fall on the illuminated screen
And you say it’s raining too
Giggling to myself and blushing here and there
Picking up the pace or slowing down,
I rather don’t care for either
Phone vibrates again once more,
And you ask for this dance,
But how I say, thumbs vigorously at work
Pretend, a simple answer,
So I walk home alone still true,
Only now spinning in a happy lil’ tune
As we go about dancing in the rain

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The way you make me feel

by *KillerKiona, Dec 15, 2012, 10:05:08 PM
Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Teen / Free Verse

Every thought of you has its roots of bliss
Yet they trace towards to branches of pain
We're separated by a vast ocean
Yet I feel your presence everyday
My mind is torn apart by your absence
Yet it's brought together by your simple words

If I thought hard enough, would you come back?
If I wished on every shooting star, would you fill the cracks?
If I sad I was sorry, would you believe it as a fact?
If I darken every light in my life, would you brighten what has become pitch black?

Saying I miss you isn't enough
Saying I love you doesn't build trust
Saying I want you back is just lust

I think of you each day, but you do think of me in the same way?
I think about the laughs we had shared, but to go back down memory lane I could not bear
I think back on how we use to gaze at the stars, but this pain is too deep, too far
I think about the meals we use to share, but was not telling me how you felt fair?

We're young, life has joy to offer, but if we're friends again would it make the pain softer?
We're young, there are plenty of fish in the sea, but you were the only fish I could see
We're young, I don't want to be a burden, but my love for you is too great and of that I am certain

This is the way you make me feel

The way you make me feelby *KillerKiona

Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Teen / Free Verse

There goes those hormones again, making a ruckus.

Critique by =Shadowsoflosthope Dec 26, 2012, 8:54:29 AM

The theme itself isn't all that new. Its worn down and almost lazy to use but you went in an entirely new direction with it that added a certain amount of flare. Instead of merely defining your love for this person, you instead recognize that your love could hurt what relationship you already have with that person, and no matter how much it hurts you and how much you miss them , you can't tell them your feelings. You instead write about the memories of your love and the pain of their absence. The form is lengthy and far too many pauses in your overall structure of the piece, but overall the piece had a beautifully despairing feel, and was original than i expected. It was a very good piece, and i believe it deserves many more favorites. It certainly has my fav.

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*Me2Smart4U Dec 25, 2012 Student Digital Artist

this poem is strong and very powerful.. I deeply feel the true emotions expressed...
this is a very well written piece.. I enjoyed the creative flow of words..AWESOME Job

*KillerKiona Dec 26, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Thanks!

*Me2Smart4U Dec 27, 2012 Student Digital Artist

You are welcome

~heyitskixX Dec 16, 2012 Student General Artist

I believe this is how I feel at the moment.

*KillerKiona Dec 16, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Got them feels huh?
I hope you'll feel better!

~heyitskixX Dec 18, 2012 Student General Artist

thank ya

~djdanilly Dec 16, 2012 Professional Artisan Crafter

I'm a counselor, note me

~Kthejaybee3 Dec 15, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

This is so...beautiful... I really like it

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